Sunday, 29 June 2014

Why?

Poetry Prompt Day 3 - A confusing figure of speech.

Why?

Why do we say
(when we're the happiest we have ever felt)
that we are
falling
             in
                   love.

Surely it would be more accurate to say
                          love
                    to
            up
rising
                                   or
 taken my breath away in love
                                   or
                   around             love
skipping                     in

That is,
if it's as good
as everyone says it is.



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